[Cover Song] Platinum - I am a Dreamer

My 1st song cover (Platinum - I am a Dreamer)
Note:
I only sing the 1st part of the song... and.. I was too embarrassed with my voice and recording skills... nonetheless, I decide to ask for your opinions. >///<

thanks !

https://soundcloud.com/ryvallen/platinum-i-am-a-dreamer

P.S. I took the instrumental video from here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wI3OLgKKwDA